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Papier du Jour

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 23, 2012
Posted in: Writing, Trifecta Challenge. Tagged: Algebra, Trifecta, Homework, Pica, Math, kid eating paper, Eating Disorder. 8 comments

The Trifecta Challenge this week is to write a piece that is between 33 and 333 words using the word “wild” as defined below.

3: a (1): not subject to restraint or regulation : uncontrolled; also : unruly
      (2) : emotionally overcome <wild with grief>; also : passionately eager or enthusiastic
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Greg hated math. He wasn’t good at it, didn’t understand it, nor did he care to. In Greg’s mind, his Algebra 1 class was inconsequential to his future and whatever that future may or may not hold. Greg wasn’t interested in much of anything, if the truth were to be known. Girls, sports, cars; all of the things a 16-year old should be focused on were non-existent for Greg.
His mother described him as being “wild with apathy” toward life.
But there was one thing that held Greg spellbound. It controlled his every move, thought and emotion. Even the sound of its crinkling, ripping, unfolding and even shredding caused him to salivate like a starving predator closing in on its prey…
The bell rang and algebra class had begun. The instructor asked the students to hand-in their homework. Greg’s was half-finished, and what was completed was wrong, wrong, wrong.
The instructor walked through the aisles of desks, collecting each student’s homework. When it was Greg’s turn, he ripped the page from his spiral notebook, but the sound of the paper ripping free from its metal coil was too much.
Rather than handing his homework to the instructor, Greg jammed it in his mouth and began to chew with ecstatic gusto.
“Sorry,” Greg said as he gulped this delicacy called paper. “I ate my homework.”
Years passed before Greg would learn of an eating disorder called “Pica.”
 
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Sky Blue!

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 21, 2012
Posted in: Poetry, Creative Writing. Tagged: Creative writing, Hopscotch, Child. 10 comments

I was going through some old writing from my first Creative Writing class in the early 90′s. This is what I found:

 

 

My spirit danced in the love of your laughing

blue eyes as we skipped hand in hand down our sidewalk.

Through the yellow rays of our neighborhood’s sunlight

we passed the daffodils in bloom and yesterdays’

smudged and fuzzy hopscotch game.

Sky Blue!

Giggling, we sang a song from a radio

or TV commercial I’d never heard since.

My first day of kindergarten you

said we should wear our matching mother

-daughter print dresses you made,

so we wouldn’t  miss each other as much.

Together

we waited for the bus so I wouldn’t feel

afraid around the older kids. You gently

squeezed my hand in yours when they called me a baby

because is still needed you. We held hands

until it was time for me to go. I watched

you wave to me, smiling through

your tears as the bus driver took me farther

and farther away from you. I finally

turned away when the cruel shadows

of elm and maple trees hid you from me;

tears cascading from my eyes onto

the little print dress you made.

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Share Your World

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 21, 2012
Posted in: Writing, Share My World. Tagged: Cigarette, Share Your World, Wine. 6 comments

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Are you left or right handed?

I’m right-handed.

 

 

 

 

 

What is one thing you love about being an adult?

Being able to legally smoke and drink.

 

 

 

 

 

What do I need to unlearn?

How to smoke and drink.

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is success for me?

Success to me means being satisfied with who I am, what I am, and that in the end, my regrets will be “too few to mention.”

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Six-Word-Saturday

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 19, 2012
Posted in: 6ws, Writing. Tagged: blogging, Calzone, Cooking, Olive oil, Stromboli, Wikipedia, Writers Resources. 6 comments

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It’s that time again, folks: to described an action-packed week fraught with drama and chaos, in just six words!

My week consisted of writing content for a variety of genres:

1) Pork chops http://www.yummyporkchoprecipes.com/

 

Beer Chops Romani

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2) Calzones http://www.calzone-recipes.com/

 

Spinach Calzone

 

 

 

 

 

3) Stromboli

A Stromboli

 

 

 

 

 

 

4) Jewlery

 

 

 

 

 

5) Judaica

 

 

 

 

 

 

6) Editing

illustration of a pink eraser

illustration of a pink eraser (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

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looking in the glass

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 18, 2012
Posted in: Haiku Heights, Writing. Tagged: Haiku, Haiku Heights, Poetry, Writing and Editing. 18 comments

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I don’t wear a mask

to hide my Self  from the world—

but from the mirror.

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Share Your World

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 14, 2012
Posted in: Share My World, Writing. Tagged: Blog, Czech Republic, Harp, Israel, masada israel, Prague, Share Your World, Travel, Writing. 15 comments

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You are comfortable doing nothing? For long stretches of time?

It depends on what kind of nothing we are talking about. If it is sitting alone in an empty room without windows and nothing to look at, then, “No.” But I can sit and write or read for hours on end. Obviously. 
If you could inherit a vacation home anywhere in the world in which you could spend two months a year, where would it be?

It would either be the city of Prague in the Czech Republic, or Masada, Israel.

Masada, Israel

Prague, Czech Republic

If you were instantly able to play one musical instrument perfectly that you never have played before, what would it be?

The Harp. A large gold harp like they play in symphonies. Since I was a kid, I’ve wanted to learn to play the harp.

Just like this one!

Would you rather be given $10,000 for your own use or $100,000 to give anonymously to strangers?

10K wouldn’t do much for me.  Even if it did I would choose the 100K to give to strangers or people that I know who are in need.

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A Sestina: “On the Rocks”

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 13, 2012
Posted in: Creative Writing, Poetry. Tagged: Poetry, Sestina. 8 comments

 

 

 

 

 

She’s sick. Her nose starts to run

and bleed. Crackling leaves

fall out of the trees and spread

a carpet of scratchy brown

over her world. She hugs and rocks

herself; staring down at a street

that mocks her. A battered street

sign wobbles, ignored. Cars run

through it and punkls throw rocks

in its face. The sight leaves her numb: it is she who is the brown

dented sign. The paranoia begins to spread.

Flinching beneath her bed spread

she tries to forget about her street

life; but a trembling finger traces the brown

stain on her pillow. Her senses run

wild: she hears the scrape of leaves

outside, and swears they are sharding rocks

into powder. Salivating, she rocks

hard and shivers, tasting the spread

of howling madness. She feels the dead leaves

scrawling her name on the street.

Her best pair of stockings have a run

in each leg, but her five inch brown

stilettos are brand new. Her brown,

shiny hair swirls at her waist. And she rocks

across the asphalt knowing the run

in her stocking will spread

up her thighs with each strut. Street

life agrees with her tonight. Damp leaves

cling to one spiked heel as she leaves

her corner with some john in a brown

Chrysler. An hour later the street

is forgotten as she shaves sparkling rocks

into lines of powder. The euphoric spread

whispers–daring her imagination to run

beyond itself; run shrieking through wild leaves

burning with psychosis. With arms spread like brown

broken branches, she soars to the rocks in the street.

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For Vivian

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 12, 2012
Posted in: Trifecta Challenge, Writing. Tagged: blogging, Mom, Mothers, trifextra challenge, Vivian Mazur, writer. 32 comments

The Trifextra Challenge this week is a 33-word piece using the word, “Mother.”

The saddest thing

about ageing  is not the

gray hair,

crow’s feet or

even the god-awful

AARP-mail.

The worst thing is having to tell people about who my mother Was,

rather than Is.

My Mom

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Share My World

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 8, 2012
Posted in: Creative Writing, Share My World. Tagged: Business Services, creativity, Franz Kafka, Freelancer, Share My World, Writing, Writing and Editing. 10 comments

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Which do you prefer sweet or salty?  Or both at the same time?

I prefer sweet.

Have you finished/started anything new or creative?

Yes, I have several freelance writing gigs going on; all of which involve creativity.

How do you want to be remembered?

I’d like to be remembered as a good and loyal friend, and one hell of a good writer.

Austrian Writer Franz Kafka

Name one thing you wish you could change about yourself.

Just one? I’d grow a backbone that was as solid and stable as rebar. Right now my backbone can best be described as a wimpy jellyfish.

Steel rebars for arming concrete (top) and met...
Steel rebars for arming concrete (top) and metal shingles (bottom). (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
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Not Every Rose Has Its Thorns

Posted by SusanWritesPrecise on May 5, 2012
Posted in: Saturday Centus, Writing. Tagged: Blog, Creative writing, Rose, Saturday Centus, Texas. 8 comments

When its “plant-parents” divorce was final, the ex-wife promptly uprooted a  yellow rose from her garden. The ex-husband watched in disbelief as she carefully replanted it in a ceramic  pot and placed it in the passenger seat of her car. She buckled it in its seat belt as if it were a child in a car seat, and drove away.

When the woman reached Amarillo she planted the  rose in her new garden and watered it everyday.

The rose felt like an idiot, just as it did in the Connecticut garden.

There’s a yellow rose in Texas

made of plastic.

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