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white powder blankets the meadow–
until the dog pees.
Tags: Creative writing, HAIKU, poetry
totally unexpected ending but then that’s life… full of surprises…
Thank you, Reshma! I agree life is full of…surprises. :-)
Indeed, ‘Until the dog pees’ is a hit with me too. The imagery is in my face fantastic.
Hee! Glad you enjoyed. Dog pee is a great attention-grabber.
yeah…not the most welcome of golden decorations… but when you gotta go, you gotta go somewhere:-)
This is true. A body can’t hold it forever! Thanks for stopping by, Laura!
Love it – last lines are such fun. Health & words for 2013
Thanks Mandy. So glad you enjoyed!
Oh, this is so good. The last line caught me off guard
Hee! Thanks, readin.’ Much appreciated. :-)
Ok, here I go again . . . my highest compliment: wish I had thought of that! You made me laugh out loud.
Well, thank you! What a nice compliment. Glad you enjoyed!
Hey, glistening snow makes little dogs need to pee…like a swimming pool compels little kids to pee! It’s one of those adorable facts of life…
So true, Marylin! Thanks for stopping by. :-)
Silly! Happy Holidays, Susan.
Thanks, Elyse! Silly is good. :-)
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