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Glistening crystal-

white powder blankets the meadow–

until the dog pees.

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16 Comments

  1. Reshma says:

    totally unexpected ending but then that’s life… full of surprises…

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  2. Indeed, ‘Until the dog pees’ is a hit with me too. The imagery is in my face fantastic.

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  3. yeah…not the most welcome of golden decorations… but when you gotta go, you gotta go somewhere:-)

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  4. Love it – last lines are such fun. Health & words for 2013

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  5. Oh, this is so good. The last line caught me off guard

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  6. Ok, here I go again . . . my highest compliment: wish I had thought of that! You made me laugh out loud.

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  7. Hey, glistening snow makes little dogs need to pee…like a swimming pool compels little kids to pee! It’s one of those adorable facts of life…

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  8. Elyse says:

    Silly! Happy Holidays, Susan.

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