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Scarred for Life


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Jagged lies destroy

years of trust, shatter hearts—scars  

them with red hot tears.

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11 Comments

  1. Scriptor Obscura says:

    I can relate to this. So sad, torturous, painful. I can relate to this so much right now. :(

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  2. Timing’s all WRONG. Not your’s; theirs. Love this, Susan. Fantastic.

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  3. ElizOF says:

    Sadly… many of us have been there… Touching. :-)

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  4. Barb says:

    Me, too. I love the red hot tears part, though I’m not sure why? Maybe because that’s how my face feels after a good bawl?

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  5. Very eloquent, Susan!

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  6. Red hot tears–YES! This is excellent, Susan!

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  7. Sparkly Angel says:

    Sad and tough times!
    Beautiful haiku Susan!

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  8. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Been there! Know exactly what you mean!

    Scarlet Letters

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  9. GREAT interpretation of the prompt. RED HOT tears captures it all

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  10. unfetteredbs says:

    red hot tears.. scalding good

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