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An icicle breeze
cuts the air like frozen fire—
helpless tears burn cheeks.
Tags: HAIKU, Home, poetry, winter, Writing and Editing
The picture works well with your haiku. ;-)
Thank you ElizOF! Glad you sropped by.
What a startling image!
No Ruffling Breeze
Thanks MMteacher. No ruffling breezes around here!
Thank you, Ann. So glad you enjoyed!
Very strong writing.
Thank you, Alice. Much appreciated!
Love the imagery but the accompanying picture jumps in and takes some of the sting out.
I like, “cuts the air like frozen fire” also.
Thanks Tess. I wondered about that picture…
I like the frozen fire – nice image.
The picture reminds me of a scene from the sci-fi film, THE DAY AFTER TOMORROW.
Eerie chills. Good job!
Thank you, Marylin. :-)
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