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Outside the Shelter


An icicle breeze

cuts the air like frozen fire—

helpless tears burn cheeks.

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14 Comments

  1. ElizOF says:

    The picture works well with your haiku. ;-)

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  2. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    “frozen fire”

    What a startling image!

    No Ruffling Breeze

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  3. Alice Keys says:

    Very strong writing.

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  4. Love the imagery but the accompanying picture jumps in and takes some of the sting out.
    I like, “cuts the air like frozen fire” also.

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  5. oneofaclass says:

    I like the frozen fire – nice image.

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  6. The picture reminds me of a scene from the sci-fi film, THE DAY AFTER TOMORROW.
    Eerie chills. Good job!

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