Outside the Shelter Written by susanwritesprecise An icicle breeze cuts the air like frozen fire— helpless tears burn cheeks. Haiku Heights sodahead.com 41.887901 -72.481624 About these ads Share this:Share on TumblrEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related 14 thoughts on “Outside the Shelter” The picture works well with your haiku. ;-) LikeLike Reply Thank you ElizOF! Glad you sropped by. LikeLike Reply “frozen fire” What a startling image! No Ruffling Breeze LikeLike Reply Thanks MMteacher. No ruffling breezes around here! LikeLike Reply Powerful. LikeLike Reply Thank you, Ann. So glad you enjoyed! LikeLike Reply Very strong writing. LikeLike Reply Thank you, Alice. Much appreciated! LikeLike Reply Love the imagery but the accompanying picture jumps in and takes some of the sting out. I like, “cuts the air like frozen fire” also. LikeLike Reply Thanks Tess. I wondered about that picture… LikeLike Reply I like the frozen fire – nice image. LikeLike Reply Thank you! LikeLike Reply The picture reminds me of a scene from the sci-fi film, THE DAY AFTER TOMORROW. Eerie chills. Good job! LikeLike Reply Thank you, Marylin. :-) LikeLike Reply Go ahead. I don't bite very hard. Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (Address never made public) Name Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.